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-Crimson like full lusty lips, beckoning you into a kiss. The flame of passion.
+Crimson. Lips beckoning you into a kiss. The flame of passion.
 
-Electric blue like the roar of a blowtorch, the crackle and snap of lightning sparks. The flame of drive.
+Electric blue. The roar of a blowtorch, the crackle and snap of lightning sparks. The flame of drive.
 
-Clear like open air, shimmering on a hot summers day. The flame of spirit.
+Clear. Open air, shimmering on a hot summers day. The flame of spirit.
 
-White like a melded rainbow, colours melted together into searing snow. The flame of hope.
+White. A melded rainbow, colours fused together into searing snow. The flame of hope.
 
-Yellow like gilt leaf wrought defiant on crisp white page, glowing against. The flame of optimism.
+Yellow. Gilt leaf wrought defiant on crisp white page, glowing against. The flame of optimism.
 
-Cherry red like the core of a star, the roaring celestial furnace. The flame of strength.
+Cherry Red. The core of a star, the roaring celestial furnace. The flame of strength.
 
-Blood red like the torrential force pumping through your veins, the rush of power and vitality. The flame of life.
+Blood Red. Torrential force pumping through your veins, the rush of power and vitality. The flame of life.
 
-Pink like petals on the most delicate of roses, wafer thin and dancing to the breeze. The flame of love.
+Pink. Delicate rose petals, wafer thin and dancing to the breeze. The flame of love.
 
 <span style="color: #700F00;">Crimson</span>, <span style="color: #7DD2DF">electric blue</span>, <span style="color: #00000000;-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0.8px;
 -webkit-text-stroke-color: white;">clear</span>, white, <span style="color: yellow">yellow</span>, <span style="color: #CD001A">cherry red</span>, <span style="color: #7D221D">blood red</span>, <span style="color: pink;">pink</span>.